i (i) wrote,
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desert haiku

dry rock set in sand
heavy fall and winter rain
brilliant bouquet


now, i know that "brilliant" technically has only two syllables, but it almost sounds like three, and i liked the simplicity of "brilliant bouquet", rather than "brilliant spring bouquet".
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